Thursday, 30 August 2018

Roblox ad


  1. Hi Jemma,
    Thanks for the video, it's great that you kept that 'why' that we talked about in mind when you made your ad. You could try voice over on WeVideo next time to help with the volume factor.

    1. thanks for your comment i will take in you advice

  2. Hi Jemma,

    Great acting in your ad - I like the way you all used clear voices, with great expression. I agree with Miss Watts that a voiceover may be helpful so we can hear you more clearly - at the moment the talking is slightly muffled due to the background music.


    Miss H


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