WOW! What an awesome poem, I love that you managed to get it to rhyme! Very impressive! I like the way you have described the situation and the story you were able to tell in so few lines :) Have you written lots of poems before? You sound like a bit of an expert to me! :)
I am wondering what snacks you might have stocked up on to watch the Southern Lights?
This poem has a real feeling of excitement - like when you gather round for a show and you can feel the excited energy of everyone around you! Have you seen the Southern Lights before? I haven't but I think it would be amazing and I would be feeling exactly how your poem is describing!
Hey Ellee! Thanks for the comment! I dont even think I meant to make it rhyme but it word that way! The snack I would bring would sooo be pringles! Thanks for the comment again! Jemma :3
Hello Jemma, I am Vitaraag. This is an amazing poem. I am really having fun reading your blog posts. My favourite line for the acrostic poem was So snuggle up so me and you can watch the view. Maybe next time you can say what you are talking about. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Hi Jemma!
ReplyDeleteWOW! What an awesome poem, I love that you managed to get it to rhyme! Very impressive!
I like the way you have described the situation and the story you were able to tell in so few lines :)
Have you written lots of poems before?
You sound like a bit of an expert to me! :)
I am wondering what snacks you might have stocked up on to watch the Southern Lights?
This poem has a real feeling of excitement - like when you gather round for a show and you can feel the excited energy of everyone around you!
Have you seen the Southern Lights before?
I haven't but I think it would be amazing and I would be feeling exactly how your poem is describing!
Great work Jemma, really awesome poem!
Nga mihi,
Ellee :)
Hey Ellee!
DeleteThanks for the comment! I dont even think I meant to make it rhyme but it word that way!
The snack I would bring would sooo be pringles!
Thanks for the comment again!
Jemma :3
Hello Jemma,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. This is an amazing poem. I am really having fun reading your blog posts. My favourite line for the acrostic poem was So snuggle up so me and you can watch the view. Maybe next time you can say what you are talking about. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Vitaraag